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[A.KADER]

As a new member and a man who loves the power of the word I like to join this discussion through posting some poems and discussing them in order to learn more about poetry writing and develop the ability of composing good poems.

[Jenni Derfoldy]

I look forward to the poems and discussions.

[A.KADER]

THE BROKEN M
How long one must wait
for one's love and date
hearts are breaking to pieces
who is brave to hold in kiss,
and faithfully
avows I do love you
always no hate
whenever hearts beat.
sweetie! sorry!
no one would hold your place
you are my soul inside cells
streaming from toe to head
you have been so loved
since Eve and Adam.
Baby!
you are the oldest and newest name
in the lovers' kingdom
which is shared in Ibraham
forever you stay life blosom
eternally called FREEDOM

[Tony Martin]

Is this community still running?